2/08/2011

N-Rod's leads

Leads
  1.  Descriptive: Today, Pam drove to pick up her children after their basket ball game.  Her children were very tired and ready to go home, Pam left the Basket ball court and was getting home as fast as she could. On the ride home she was hit by a drunk driver and now is confined to a wheel chair, both her children now are in coma, one intoxocated person can take the lives of three if not more when driving.
  2.  Rhetorical: How many lives are taken by Drunk drivers every year In Texas Every year?  Travis county sherif John Carson has kept track since 1995 and the numbers are incredibly depressive.
  3.   Alcohol is one of the major causes of death on roads in Texas. Last year there were 45 alcohol-related fatalities in the Valley. How many will there be this year? Dont drink then drive.

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  2. your leads are pretty good. just, on your rhetorical lead you put every year twice

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